Great idea. Cool design. Very close to really rocking it. The perspective on the copy is just too hard too read. Could have used some lead copy talking directly to the audience.
Great idea I like it more than the pool idea, very strong copy, maybe you should choose another position for it, I know that it gives depth to your lake, but as a fisher man instead of getting letters is better to catch a “vectorial” fish.
V clever if you know what it is all about; shows a pool and shows members being the fish ready for employers to catch. But the writing is q difficult to read and it doesn’t explain what the site is or what it is for.
i think this lacks of details specially the water effect, first look? you wont see the concept at all, but if your trying to imagine what it is carefully, then you get noticed…..not too strong
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Like the tag line and also nice use of type giving the design a real depth.
A good concept, but a bit confusing, and hard to read. It doesn’t say what the company does!
Interesting, but not for me.
Reminds me instantly of a well know gaming machine – wouldn’t link it to CreativePool at all – gives out wrong message for me, sorry.
Great idea. Cool design. Very close to really rocking it. The perspective on the copy is just too hard too read. Could have used some lead copy talking directly to the audience.
Great idea I like it more than the pool idea, very strong copy, maybe you should choose another position for it, I know that it gives depth to your lake, but as a fisher man instead of getting letters is better to catch a “vectorial” fish.
V clever if you know what it is all about; shows a pool and shows members being the fish ready for employers to catch. But the writing is q difficult to read and it doesn’t explain what the site is or what it is for.
It could be mistaken for a dating site, as in Plenty more fish in the sea…
i think this lacks of details specially the water effect, first look? you wont see the concept at all, but if your trying to imagine what it is carefully, then you get noticed…..not too strong
Great concept, Neil. I think you’ve fulfilled the brief perfectly! Very clean and fresh.
Good luck!